Scholarship / The Shanghai World Expo - most amazing cultural experiences in my life. [2]

Hi fphoebe12, I am brandnew and green-handed and rushing for deadline, only one correction/ suggestion

after being present at the 1989 Tiananmen Square Massacre, vowed to leave China for the fear of being arrested.

gotta go.

best of luck

Writing Feedback / I recommend that government should spend more money on improving highway [2]

A public debate has arisen on should government spend more money on improving highways or public transportation has arisen to attention.

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