Writing Feedback / Languages That I Know [5]

It's good topic and well written but it needs more elaboration of the qualities of good marriage so that causes of divorce can be explained in their comparison.

Change "marrying your high school friend" as it is not necessay and also sentence loses its impact.
Mutual understanding and self respect also be included in causes of divorce.
Last conclusive para is missing essence of the topic.

Letters / Resignation letter (from SM Camaraza Enterprises Inc) [3]

Always write down short and powerful sentences. start this way
"It is to inform you that I got an opportunity of higher studies abroad. I am highly interested to avail it."
After that say good words about your existing job and organization and then submit your resignation (unwillingness)

Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK-2 (some avoid changes and others believe changes are good) [4]

Good topic
I believe that 'Change' is life.
If you are afraid of change then you can not enjoy the life.
Life is full of colours! No body can see all colors but change believer enjoy most of its colours.
What is change? new environment! but how to go in new environment... new country, new job, new profession, new friend, new religion, new faith, new books, new culture, new food, etc etc

I want to change my taste so I am heading to Resturant.