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Feb 17, 2011
Book Reports / King Lear Paragraph - Forming a good topic sentence? [4]

I was assigned to write a paragraph on how Goneril's treatment of her father was, to an extent, justified.

I came up with some points, all of which revolve around the fact that Lear's riotous entourage of a hundred knights clearly disrupted the sanctity of Goneril's castle so her decision to dismiss half of Lear train was good justification.

I just need help constructing a clear and concise topic sentence which resonates my argument well.

Help would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks.
Brwned   
Feb 19, 2011
Book Reports / King Lear Paragraph - Forming a good topic sentence? [4]

Lear's riotous entourage of a hundred knights clearly disrupted the sanctity of Goneril's castle thus her decision to dismiss half of Lear train was, to an extent, well-justified.

Haha, I guess that does work as a topic sentence although I did create a longer and more detailed one.

Lear, being a tragically superficial and self-indulgent ruler, unmistakably does not see his own folly when Goneril criticizes him and his entourage for disrupting the sanctity of her castle, despite it being a well-justified claim.

Which one is stronger?
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