Writing Feedback / task 2 ESSAY ABOUT TRADITIONAL FOOD AND FAST FOOD-(IELTS) [NEW]

Topic six:
In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast food. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

I am totally convinced by the fact that the increasingly popularity on consumption of fast foods has triggered negative impacts to our daily living- style, such as the unconscious changes in dietary orientation.Yet, this unfortunate trend is not restricted to developed countries where fast food pictures an efficient lifestyle, but is also evident among other poor ones.

Obesity caused by fast food ingestion such as burgers and fries has recently become one of the most detrimental diseases among youngsters. Therefore, the replacement of traditional home-made food by fast foods has only enhanced the severity of this situation. Also, it has given rise to a burden that governments have to invest a considerable amount of budget into medicine researches in order to address this phenomenon. Furthermore, the development of fast food also exerts subtle but significant influences on the relationship of family members. People who used to have meals at home will now spend the most of meal times outside. Similarly, the outstanding position of fast foods may also drive homogenize of different cultures resulting loss of distinctiveness of a nation, at least to food patterns.

My own view is that there is no one most suitable food orientation style for people in recent times. However, the unchangeable and nutritional traditional food is integrated with some degree of fast food when people only obtain limited time. Apparently, it is the combination of traditional food and fast food that people are more likely to enjoy the diversity of food choices to keep pace with the speedy of the society in different nations.

Arguably, the expansion of fast food, to some extent, does have its own merits. People with limited rest time tend to choose fast food due to its efficiency . When they have a more time , the traditional food would be selected by the majority of people because of its nutritional parameters . However, apparently, it is the combination of traditional food and fast food that people are more likely to enjoy the diversity of food choices to keep pace with the speedy of the society in different nations.

In conclusion, without suggesting that there have been a small proportion of strengthens associated with the food pattern supplanted by fast food,however, personally, I am inclined to conclude that only when people are aware of the numerous problems caused by fast food, which outnumber the merits of the new food pattern, could individuals confine more attention to choose the health dietary, actually.

Writing Feedback / SPECIALISTIC SUBJECTS v A RANGE OF SUBJECTS IN UNIVERSITY [3]

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Topic five:University students are more focus on specialistitic subjects in nowadays. Some people think universities should encourage students to study at a range of subjects in addation to special area?

It is agreeable to me that students in a particular field may become extremely specialised and competent in these areas which eventually allows them to be more competitive in such workplace be expected to be fully advanced in some distinctive fields. therefore allowing them to be better capable in the workplace However, there is an increasing demand of employees with skills in any direction which enhances their adaptability for any jobs given current dynamic situations.

Apparently, students attain little access to career orientation. The numerous curricula could exert significant and conducive influences on the temperate stage, and students might get a clear perspective of their futures gradually during the time spent in the college. Also, in terms of subjects, it is true that a certain combinations of knowledge from different fields serve as a vehicle to put fulfillment of various areas into the practice. For instance, as archeology requires one to have understanding not only in history ,some degree of genetics is also needed in order to conduct scientific researches.

Interestingly, some subjects are learned not only for their own sake but for the further study of other special areas. For example, the popularity of computers among students makes possible the realization that without knowledge concerning with computers or Internet, students would not easily have access to on line courses. In addition, such course related to music and psychology by all means ensure the bodily health of students and good mood can unconsciously boost their enthusiasm in other expertise and even their whole life

In conclusion, without suggesting that a small proportion of people are likely to sign a high praise of special subjects, which contributes to the appreciative benefits for people in daily life. Oppositely, in my view, the university should arrange as wide and various subjects as possible and then students would have more opportunities to select what they are interested in, eventually taking advantage of the special skill into their career lives.