Scholarship / Financial need letter (to obtain a Bachelor's Degree in Engineering) [4]

This a well written essay. Very descriptive and personal and I like the cohesiveness and transitions made your essay flow very well. Am not sure if this applies to you because I know some countries spell words differently but the spelling of the word "favorite" in the second paragraph, 3rd sentence may need to be revised that was the only thing I saw in terms of corrections. Other than that well put together essay and good luck on the scholarship I believe you will get it!

Undergraduate / "the one reason why I choose SCC.." - Can I write this in essay? [4]

You can also add to your essay what valuable skills you feel or will obtain while attending SCC and how your career will be advanced further once you complete the degree and what attributes you will contribute to SCC as well.