Writing Feedback / What role should Australia play in future world affairs? [15]

Thanks very much for the feedback, since posting that i have almost overhauled that, and relinked it to the topic. That was an unfinished essay, have now finished.

Thanks for the luck, and the same to you. Unfortunately you'll only be receiving the half scholarship, as the full one is mine ;)
Just out of interest, where do you plan on going?

Writing Feedback / What role should Australia play in future world affairs? [15]

I don't think I'll ask about France.. :P

Yeah, I also sent mine off this afternoon, express post. Hopefully it gets there!!

I'm heading to Germany, have been learning it for 4 years, and have German heritage, so I am extremely excited for September! I would love to work for a German sporting team in the future, hopefully doing sports psychology with Bayern-Munchen, so this would set me up perfectly!

I'm the same, it's very unlikely I'll be able to go if i miss out on the Full Scholarship, as with the half you would still need to pay around $4500!

Actually the dates are given on the flyer, announcement is made on April 15th, quite soon i reckon! They'll have their work cut out for them finishing by then :P

Alright, well I'm gonna be a graceful winner, so when i get the scholarship I'll try not to rub it in your face too much ;)

Writing Feedback / What role should Australia play in future world affairs? [15]

Oh well, who ever wins will deserve the right to gloat as much as they want!
You sound like you know what you want then, good on you! I'm still so confused about so much, no idea what i want to be, or do. Kinda frustrating. Oh well, hopefully MY german trip will fix all that ;)

I'd go with the sporty rather than the smart, but I get by pretty well. I play a ridiculous amount of sport though. Helps me sleep well at night, as i literally don't have the energy to lift a finger :P

Wow, law, how ambitious! Good luck, i really hope you do well in this. And if by some twist of fate i don't win, i hope you do, as it sounds like it would mean the world to you, and that you would make the most of every opportunity you get.

I know, it's so close! Just over 2 weeks :O They should get it done, i'd say no more than 2,000 essays would come in, and they'd have a fair few judges. Plus quite a few would be not considered due to their marks, or what their teachers said.. Lucky my marks were all As/A+s :D

I'm starting to get nervous though, despite my perceived confidence. Ah well, I know that if i don't get it, which does seem likely against 1999 other students, I'll have other opportunities :) Doesn't stop me hoping though!