Graduate / Master in Petroleum Engineering emphasize in Fracture Modeling [4]

-You shouldn't talk how you were not doing well in school or you have no interest in working. Those are signs of weaknesses. Instead, you should display your strengths in your essay and explain how you became interested in fracture modeling through [insert reasons here]

-You shouldn't abbreviate professor or MIT in your essay.

I found it hard for me to find your answers to the following questions:

(1) Why fracture modeling?
(2) Why [Insert University's name]
(3) What will you do with a Master in Petroleum Engineering from [Insert University's name]

It's best if you answered them in section(s):
(1) Intro
(2) Why fracture modeling?
(3) Why [Insert University's name] instead of other grad schools?
(4) What will you do with an Master's degree from [Insert University's name]?