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Television is one of the greatest inventions ever. Over the past few decades it has evolved a lot from black and white to colored , from 2d to 3d. Earlier there used a limited content on the television whereas now there is a lot. At present television broadcast a lot of stuff which is not recommended for teenager to watch but we can not stop it. Like we have heard a lot of times that "We Do What We See" we can say if one watches something bad or unadvised on the television , one would do the same! So i strongly believe that its not the television but its the content on it which influences the teenagers behavior....