MMustafa
Sep 8, 2011
Graduate / Statement of Intent for Masters of Science, Physiology [5]
Hello All
This is my first time posting here. I was hoping to get some help for my statement of interest. I already had a few people look at it but I'm still not that confident about it. I was hoping some fresh eyes can look at over and provide me with feedback, it will be greatly appreciated.
Thank you so much.
The following are expectations:
Autobiographical Essay
Format:
- One or two pages
- Single-spaced
- Printed on plain paper
- Applicants name must appear at the top of the essay
What should be included in the autobiographical essay:
- A clear statement of why the applicant wants to do research in Physiology at the University of Toronto.
- Special accomplishments
- Academic interests and future plans
- Summary of strong points in academic and research background
- Applicants might also wish to include a brief explanation of a gap in educational history (i.e. medical reasons, employment, etc.)
This is my statement of interest:
To Whom It May Concern:
My name is Maria Mustafa and I have recently completed my BSc. at the University of Guelph with a major in Biomedical Science and minor in Neuroscience. I am writing this letter of interest with the hope to attend University of McGill for Physiology. The following explains why I would be an ideal candidate for the Masters of Science position.
During my undergraduate studies, I had the opportunity to explore different areas of research field as a research assistant and primary researcher. My expedition began in the lab of Dr. Mark Fenske as an assistant researcher. His research utilized computer applications to perform neuroscience related cognitive studies on humans. I had the opportunity to assist in research and gain deeper understanding of e-prime software, which is specifically used to design psychology experiments, data collection and analysis.
Although Dr. Fenske's research was intriguing, I found being the primary researcher for a study in Dr. Boyer Winters's lab presented me with new challenges. I learned to design, alter and troubleshoot my experiments under the supervision of the professor. The background research performed prior to the experiment commencement assisted to build the foundation and to better understand each research project's rationale. This project's primary objective was to develop a rodent model of Paired Associate Learning (PAL) task for the understanding of etiology and potential treatment of age-related cognitive impairments. During this project, I gained an appreciation for the molecular aspects of Alzheimer disease-related memory deficits and to utilize EthoVision XT software to conduct behavioral analysis.
During September 2010- April 2011, I was devoted to conduct research for Biomedical Science (major). Similar background research was necessary prior to the execution of the experiment. I worked with one of the faculty members in cardiovascular research, Dr. Ron Johnson. Along with understanding of the core effects of drugs such as norepinephrine, clonidine and potassium chloride on in-vitro vasculature, I was able to gain micro-dissection skills. This study deepened my understanding of the impact of stress on cardiovascular system.
The final study I performed was under the supervision of a faculty member in cardio-respiratory research, Dr. Jeremy Simpson. I had the opportunity to develop and form distinctive western blots for the detection of proteins released from fibroblast and cardiac myocyte cells undergoing stress.
These experiences have shaped me into a keen researcher with a critical eye. I would like to continue such detailed research in the lab of Physiology at the University of McGill. Although my past research was devoted to understanding diseases associated with neural and cardiovascular changes, I am interested in all aspects of human biology. I am a devoted student, who can contribute a fresh perspective if given the opportunity.
In the future, I would like to continue in the field of research and gain further insight into the development of disease. Furthermore, I would like to use acquired knowledge to develop treatment and implement them as a physician.
Sincerely,
Maria Mustafa
Hello All
This is my first time posting here. I was hoping to get some help for my statement of interest. I already had a few people look at it but I'm still not that confident about it. I was hoping some fresh eyes can look at over and provide me with feedback, it will be greatly appreciated.
Thank you so much.
The following are expectations:
Autobiographical Essay
Format:
- One or two pages
- Single-spaced
- Printed on plain paper
- Applicants name must appear at the top of the essay
What should be included in the autobiographical essay:
- A clear statement of why the applicant wants to do research in Physiology at the University of Toronto.
- Special accomplishments
- Academic interests and future plans
- Summary of strong points in academic and research background
- Applicants might also wish to include a brief explanation of a gap in educational history (i.e. medical reasons, employment, etc.)
This is my statement of interest:
To Whom It May Concern:
My name is Maria Mustafa and I have recently completed my BSc. at the University of Guelph with a major in Biomedical Science and minor in Neuroscience. I am writing this letter of interest with the hope to attend University of McGill for Physiology. The following explains why I would be an ideal candidate for the Masters of Science position.
During my undergraduate studies, I had the opportunity to explore different areas of research field as a research assistant and primary researcher. My expedition began in the lab of Dr. Mark Fenske as an assistant researcher. His research utilized computer applications to perform neuroscience related cognitive studies on humans. I had the opportunity to assist in research and gain deeper understanding of e-prime software, which is specifically used to design psychology experiments, data collection and analysis.
Although Dr. Fenske's research was intriguing, I found being the primary researcher for a study in Dr. Boyer Winters's lab presented me with new challenges. I learned to design, alter and troubleshoot my experiments under the supervision of the professor. The background research performed prior to the experiment commencement assisted to build the foundation and to better understand each research project's rationale. This project's primary objective was to develop a rodent model of Paired Associate Learning (PAL) task for the understanding of etiology and potential treatment of age-related cognitive impairments. During this project, I gained an appreciation for the molecular aspects of Alzheimer disease-related memory deficits and to utilize EthoVision XT software to conduct behavioral analysis.
During September 2010- April 2011, I was devoted to conduct research for Biomedical Science (major). Similar background research was necessary prior to the execution of the experiment. I worked with one of the faculty members in cardiovascular research, Dr. Ron Johnson. Along with understanding of the core effects of drugs such as norepinephrine, clonidine and potassium chloride on in-vitro vasculature, I was able to gain micro-dissection skills. This study deepened my understanding of the impact of stress on cardiovascular system.
The final study I performed was under the supervision of a faculty member in cardio-respiratory research, Dr. Jeremy Simpson. I had the opportunity to develop and form distinctive western blots for the detection of proteins released from fibroblast and cardiac myocyte cells undergoing stress.
These experiences have shaped me into a keen researcher with a critical eye. I would like to continue such detailed research in the lab of Physiology at the University of McGill. Although my past research was devoted to understanding diseases associated with neural and cardiovascular changes, I am interested in all aspects of human biology. I am a devoted student, who can contribute a fresh perspective if given the opportunity.
In the future, I would like to continue in the field of research and gain further insight into the development of disease. Furthermore, I would like to use acquired knowledge to develop treatment and implement them as a physician.
Sincerely,
Maria Mustafa