Speeches / 'Thank you to my mother for giving me the strength' - Graduation Speech [3]

I have to give a speech at my graduation next week, and I was wondering if I could get some thoughts on my speech. If anyone has any ideas to make it smoother or anything, that would be great! Thanks!

Thank you to my mother for giving me the strength to know that I can overcome anything. To my kids for supporting me through this crazy journey, I hope to be an inspiration that age, time or money is not an obstacle when you set your mind to succeed. To my friends for all the words of encouragement all those times I thought of giving up. And to my love and my angel Sedar, I cannot put into words how grateful I am for all the time you invested making sure I could study, but most of all for taking good care of our family and believing in me. After all of the craziness and fatigue of the last few years, I would have to say that it was all worth it.