Undergraduate / 'a child of two Indian parents' - RICE PERSPECTIVES ESSAY [4]

I liked the essay and I believe you answered the prompt well. You stated what you have to offer to college but for some reason I can say your extra curricular activites can speak for themselves but if its been a big influence keep it in. If anything expand or explain more about your culture and the life you come from it sounded really interesting, since your from India it would be very unique from many other applicants.