Undergraduate / 'Grew up in Indian villages' - how has macaulay honors changed you [4]

I think the length of the essay should be extended. The maximum length is 300 words, so try to make more than 200. The content of the essay is perfect. Continue with what you've got.

Undergraduate / What is the best advice you ever received? Why? And did you follow it? [4]

"Everything thing happens for good," was the best advice that I received from my mom.

Please correct the above sentence. The rest is fine. YOU always have to impress the reader in the beginning, and to do so, you need to put the quote in the very front.

Thank you,