Writing Feedback / The difference in drugs and alcohol in women. [2]

I would like to know what I have to change and what I can add to help make my paper better. Thank you.

I think one of my strength in my writing is getting all the right details. I do try to get find information that is stated in more then one-piece work. I do know one of weakness is that I have a hard time putting out the information I have. I have a hard time explaining it all the way. Another weakness it that I have a hard time getting my papers to be the full length it needs to be. I get everything I need in but cannot get the full length that is requested.