Writing Feedback / 'People to be realistic or optimistic?' - grade my SAT essay [4]

hi im new but i can help you even though im in middle school
first: my teacher told us to use the TESAS method
TESAS is:
T- topic sentence in which yours in very well structured
E- example in wich you have quite a few very good ones
S- suporting detail which you hav several
A- another example
S - another suporting detail
you have all this and more so i give you a 6

Poetry / (ideas for my Diamante poem) - I have a poetry project to do, where to start? [3]

Thanks! :-) thats really helpful! I love the idea of the flame of a forest fire and I think I can change that into wind... thank you so much! ::-))