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Aug 15, 2012
Graduate / 'higher education in economics' - my LOR for scholarship (Business and Economics ) [4]

Please help to check my LOR. Honestly, I wrote it by myself because my professor was so busy and he asked me to write my own based on some notes that he drafted. Sorry for the grammar, i'm not quite good at this. Thanks in advance

To whom it may concern,
As Vice-Principal of School of Business and Administration (SEBA) of Can Tho University, I am delighted to recommend you ABC- one of my excellent students for your scholarship grant. I have been known Vy since she was in the first year when she came for my counselor regarding her assignment and I was invited to be the judge in one of the academic contest she attended called Wilmar Agro Award.

Compared with more than one thousand students of her course, Vy is one of the most accomplished students with the outstanding achievements that can be proved quantitatively. Her record can be tracked from her very first year in the university when she passed the English entrance test at the first rank at SEBA followed by many academic achievements which most of them were first or second prize of big contests, including one second prize in Dynamic- a national contest for business and economics students. However, it is her attitude towards learning as well as her great effort on research that impressed me the most.

During her final semester, as her counselor I am impressed by her choice to work full-time instead of an internship at a company which was three hours far from our school to take a deep research on her final assignment while maintaining herself in the top students both in academic record and extracurricular activities in the university. Regardless the fact that most of students in her class used only secondary data on the final assignment, Vy was willing to conduct a research using primary data analysing and she has shown excellent analytical skills and intellectual creativity. With that experience, I can confidently assert that her qualities make her an outstanding candidate with a strong potential for research.

As far as I know, she has always had an enormous desire on seeking for higher education in economics since she was in second year. Therefore, I enthusiastically recommend her for your institution admission and scholarships grant without hesitation.

Should there be any inquiries, please feel free to contact me.
Very truly yours,
purinpurin   
Aug 15, 2012
Graduate / 'higher education in economics' - my LOR for scholarship (Business and Economics ) [4]

Thank you so much for your comments , it is very helpful. Honestly, I did not expect such a huge advice at first, but wow!! :D

He is not exactly my course professor, but he did teach me several fields during my contests (since I am my school representative in those contests), but you are right, i should be more specific in that.

Well, the main reason why I did not give specific details on my thesis is that I am doing Marketing (Branding) thesis for my workplace. The outcome was still excellent but I am afraid that they will consider it irrelevant to my major at the University (foreign trade) and what I am applying for (economics) . ( I had no other choice, though, because I worked as a Marketing Executive at that time )

Thank you again for your time. This is my first time writing this, hope i can get through!!!
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