Essays / Very confused on my Thesis statement. AP Euro History class [7]

Question: Analyze and discuss attitudes and reactins toward the participation of women in the sciences during the seventeenth and eighteenth centuries.

My Thesis attempt:
During the seventeenth and eighteenth centuries some women began to break the social norm as they ventured into the world of sciences, and these women were met with a world wind of conflicting attitudes; the attitudes from enlightened intellectuals were positive, and as were the attitudes from fellow women scientists; but, attitudes from non-enlightened scientists and traditional women were negative and filled with discontent.

This is for a AP Euro History class. Our thesis are supposed to be one(long) sentence, and they must contain our 3 groupings(prove points)

Thanks!