esimpnoxin
Dec 29, 2012
Undergraduate / "Get in the car!"; BOSTON COLLEGE SUP:CHANGING PERCEPTION OF A MOMENT [3]
Good essay; you have some good ideas about your routines vs those of others, and being a bicultural person. There are a few cliches, like "escape from conformity", and quoting McCann in the final line detracts from the flow of the essay, but that's just me being nit-picky.
Good essay; you have some good ideas about your routines vs those of others, and being a bicultural person. There are a few cliches, like "escape from conformity", and quoting McCann in the final line detracts from the flow of the essay, but that's just me being nit-picky.