Scholarship / "Good Girl" and the "Gentle Child"; Questbridge Biographical Essay [7]

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Scholarship / "Good Girl" and the "Gentle Child"; Questbridge Biographical Essay [7]

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Scholarship / "Good Girl" and the "Gentle Child"; Questbridge Biographical Essay [7]

"Mom and Dad will be the shield,
Protecting you through all your life
Because you are Daddy girl,
The very good girl
Because you are Mommy child,
The very gentle child."
-For You (Cho Con) by Pham Trong Cau -

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