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Posts by Annais
Name: Anna Ng
Joined: Nov 23, 2013
Last Post: Nov 24, 2013
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Annais   
Nov 23, 2013
Speeches / My feet started to shiver when it's my turn; What's your greatest achievement/Why? [8]

I would like to ask all of you a question: what is your greatest achievement so far?
there's one valuable thing I achieved recently and I'll treasure it till the end of my life.
It took place last week, the second day of the SAW. The day we did abseiling. My feet started to shiver when it's my turn. The roaring sea was splashing at the rocks at the bottom of the cliff.

I took a very deep breath, gripped the rope tightly and my trembling feet started to move, slowly, horrifyingly descending along the line. My feet got tougher and tougher each step they took with the encouraging cheers from my teammates. My mind was strong. I would not disappoint them and myself.

At last, I managed to complete this daunting and seemed intimidating task and touched the ground. What a relief!
Someone once said, "A challenge only becomes an obstacle when you bow to it." The reason why I take this as my greatest achievement is because the courage and confidence I gained that turned me to a girl who is willing to challenge her and being more adventurous. Life is full of challenges! Fear not. Stretch your limits. You will never know how far you can go.
Annais   
Nov 24, 2013
Speeches / My feet started to shiver when it's my turn; What's your greatest achievement/Why? [8]

Thank you so much!!!! I really appreciate your comments:D But would you please be more specific about what changes i should make on The reason why I take this as my greatest achievement is because the courage and confidence I gained that turned me to a girl who is willing to challenge her and being more adventurous Thank you!!
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