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Name: Qammer Gul
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Qammer   
Jan 6, 2014
Writing Feedback / John Diefenbaker A Legendary Man Biography Essay [4]

Hi i need some help on my essay here please, i am not a very good essay writer, so please feel free to point out any issues,. thank you very much.

John Diefenbaker
Biography Essay

There is a very famous statement by john Diefenbaker "I am the first prime minister of this country of neither English nor French origin. So I determined to bring about a Canadian citizenship that knew no hyphenated consideration...I'm very happy to be able to say that in the House of Commons today in my party we have members of Italian, Dutch, German, Scandinavian, Chinese and Ukrainian origin and they are all Canadians." John Diefenbaker, March 29, 1958. He stated this because he originated from Germany, but Diefenbaker himself was born in Canada.

John Diefenbaker was born on September 18, 1895, Neustadt, Ontario. Early life was little rough, his family moved to several locations in Ontario in John's early years. There is nothing much to know about this childhood, The Diefenbaker family moved west in 1903, because john's father Mr. William Diefenbaker accepted a position of teaching job near Fort Carlton, then in the Northwest Territories. In February 1910, the Diefenbaker family moved to Saskatoon To where the University of Saskatchewan is located today. William and Mary Diefenbaker felt that John and his brother Elmer would have greater educational opportunities in Saskatoon. John took interest in the politics since he was young. Around the ager of eight he told his mom that he would someday be Prime Minister. She told him that it was an impossible ambition, especially for a boy living on the prairies. John's first interaction with politics was in 1910, when at a train station he sold a newspaper to the Prime Minister Sir Wilfred Laurier; John had a conversation with him about politics and current affairs of those times. Sir Wilfred was very well impressed by John, especially the way John ended the conversation by saying, "I can't waste any more time on you, Prime Minister. I must get about my work."

John finished high school within Saskatoon in 1912, and then he entered University of Saskatchewan. He received his Bachelors of Arts degree in 1915 and his master of arts the following year. Within 1916, John was enlisted in the army. He served for one year in Britain before being invalidated because he was hit by a showel and returned home. John didn't leave his education, he finished by studying law. In order to help pay for his education at University of Saskatchewan law courses, John peddled his bicycle for miles from farm to farm selling books. He graduated with an LL.B. in 1919. He set up a law practice in Wakaw, near Prince Albert. John quickly established himself as a successful criminal lawyer. Over his 20-year career, he defended 18 men from the death penalty. John first married Edna Bower in 1929, but that didn't work out so well for him, and he divorced her, and got married to another woman named Olive Palmer in 1959. This marriage was going great however he still had passion for politics.

After finishing his education and becoming a successful criminal lawyer, it was time for John Diefenbaker to enter the politics, one step closer to his dream of becoming PM. John ran for a seat in the House of Commons in 1925 and 1926, but lost. He tried the provincial legislature in 1929 and 1938, but lost again. His attempt to run for mayor of Prince Albert in 1933 also failed. At last Diefenbaker was elected leader of the Conservative party of Saskatchewan in 1936, but the party won no seats in the 1938 election. Finally in the 1940 election, he won a Commons seat in the Opposition. Diefenbaker began his campaign for the average Canadian and ethnic minorities. In 1942, he criticized the government's treatment of Japanese-Canadians. He even opposed his own party in his crusades; in 1948 he blocked a Conservative campaign to outlaw the Communist party. This was the kick-off for John Diefenbaker's political career.

In the House of Commons, he debated unlike anyone else, he threw questions at the governing party that would make them speechless and they absolutely hated it when John Diefenbaker would stand up and start asking questions, people would also trust him when he brought up his touchy issues and this is how he got famous, his name started coming in newspapers. His party won a minor government in the 1957 general election; defeating Louis St. Laurent and the Liberals which had been in office for the last 22 years meanwhile he was also elected as the 13th prime minister of Canada. In 1960, his party gain massive popularity and he won majority of seats in the House of Commons, his party name was changed from "conservative" to "progressive conservative" which was just to get the attention of young people but it was just a fail move to change the name because it was changed many times during that year, but still their party was gaining popularity when John Diefenbaker became prime minister, john led the progressive conservative to three consecutive win in elections.

John Diefenbaker's Agricultural Rehabilitation and Development Act helped many struggling farmers across Canada, and Canada also started doing business with china, he found a market for their wheat china, the U.S opposed this because China was the communist country and Soviet's allies but John didn't care about the war he cared about the prosperity of the nation. , Diefenbaker implemented a Bill of Rights to protect the fundamental rights of Canadians. Diefenbaker was also responsible for changing the laws that made it possible for Aboriginal people to vote in federal elections. They were not permitted to vote before 1960. He was also the first prime minister to appoint a female cabinet minister.

Tension were rising between the Soviets and Allies, the cold war had started, and both sides were preparing for war, the soviets had launched their satellite sputnik in the orbit and they could bomb nuclear bombs but only through a bomber, this is why the allies working on the arrow Avro project in Ontario, the goal of this project was to develop a jet interceptor this was supposed to be the best defense against the soviet bombers, the government was funding this project heavily and about $400 million had been spent on this project but on 20th Feb, 1959 John Diefenbaker announced the cancellation of the Avro Arrow project and there were many reasons behind it, the main reason was the cost it was extremely high and the arrow had not yet been completed after months, another reason was that the fighter jets were becoming useless because it was the age of missiles, nuclear bombs can now be delivered through ground missile delivery system, the cancellation of this project caused a shock to the whole country and John is still remembered today for this reason.

The conservative now were back to minority in 1962 and lost the 1963 elections, the main reasons of the loss of the party were high unemployment and the dollar 'value was also lowered and the cancellation of the Avro arrow project but he continued to lead the progressive conservative party as the leader of the opposition, later in 1967 he lost a leadership vote within his own to Robert Stanfield, one of the main reason for his downfall was because of the fact that his policies were very radical He was member of the Progressive Conservative party, but his policies often went against its name,People switched to other parties because they felt they did not where the progressive conservative was going. He continued to represent his riding in the Commons. He won his last election in 1979, three months before his death on August 16.

John Diefenbaker is one of the greatest prime ministers Canada ever had, He was also very concerned on the safety, rights and freedoms of those he had power over and even those who he did not. He served people's interests very well, mainly farmers and the all the people of Canada, he always tried to do what was best for the country. Diefenbaker was influenced by Sir John A. Macdonald , and he was wanted to have a state funeral as grand as Sir John A. Macdonald. When the train that carried his body went from Ottawa to Saskatoon, people stood beside the track to pay their last respects to the man who, for all his weaknesses and failures, is still remembered for his power of speech, his affection for the people, and his inspiring vision of a great Canada. He was buried in Saskatoon.
Qammer   
Jan 12, 2014
Speeches / Secretary Speech - "Oh, so you want to be the typing person?" [6]

Shpresa
I am running for a secretary, which is much more important than simply typing. also you stated in you r last line "great thing" it should be great things. as well as you used great twice in a sentence. you should change one to like good or excellent.
Qammer   
Jan 12, 2014
Book Reports / Hamlet and Laertes both have different relationship with Ophelia, SHORT ESSAY (NEED HELP) [2]

hi i need urgent help with this essay its due in 48hours. i am bad at grammar if you could help me. that would be awesome.

Hamlet and Lacerates both have different relationship with Ophelia
In the play Hamlet, there are many characters that are similar to each other. Hamlet and Laertes are of the same age group so they have many things in common but because of the different family background they also react differently wit some decisions of the life. Hamlet and Laertes have some similarities but more differences. They both have different personalities but their motivations are same. The way they behave, their thoughts and more importantly their actions shows that they were raised in different environment but they have similar positions in their families. One important thing shown in the play is that they deeply love the same person but in different ways and they act differently when they angry.

Hamlet and Laertes both have different relationship with Ophelia. Before going to France, Laertes tells his sister about Hamlet loves for her. He tries to tell Ophelia about his intentions and the other side of Hamlet love. For Hamlet and the trifling of his favour,Hold it a fashion and a toy in blood,A violet in the youth of primary nature,Forward, not permanent, sweet, not lasting,The perfume and suppliance of a minute; No more. ( hamlet - scene 3 - line 6-10). Laertes also tells Ophelia that hamlet would have to marry someone same of his blood and status. He tries to save the future of her sister which shows his love for Ophelia. On the other hand , hamlet's love for Ophelia throughout the entire play is foggy. Hamlet tells Ophelia that he loves her , but then also says that he doesn't love her. The reason he did that could be because he knows someone was watching their conversation. He thinks that it is her father Polonius who is keeping eye on them and planning to do something. On the other hand, when Hamlet tells Ophelia to go to the nuns, it shows how much love and care he has for Ophelia . he has a doubt that Ophelia is pregnant with his child. But he doesn't want to bring the child in the world because things are not going right. Hamlet insanity makes some people think that he is crazy because of the rejection of his love for Ophelia. Later in the play, hamlet starts treating her badly which ends up taking her life. Hamlet and Laertes fight in the grave of Ophelia and both demands to be buried alive with Ophelia. They both express their love and their relationship with Ophelia in the graveyard in presence of King and Queen.

Hamlet is in a position where he does not know what to do next. He is fighting with his own emotions. He knows his uncle is the killer of his father. So he introduces it through a play in front of everyone and shows his uncle that, the incident is not a mystery anymore. In the play, he shows everything what his uncle did to kill his father. With that play Claudius, hamlet's uncle gets to know that hamlet knows everything. So he fears of losing everything. He thinks that getting rid of hamlet would be a solution. That's why he wants to send hamlet to England. He sends a secret letter, in which it said to assassinate Hamlet. But hamlet discovers it. Claudius then looks for plan B; where he searches for a violent and hasty person. Thus he finds Laertes, son of Polonius. He tells Laertes that hamlet killed his father and he must do something for revenge. They both become helping hands and just like hamlet, Laertes now want to kill the murderer of his father. Hamlet and Laertes uses different tactics in taking revenge of their father death. Even though Hamlet found that the Claudius is the murderer of his father, he took a while and patiently waited for the good time to kill Claudius. On the other hand, Laertes after knowing the news of his father death, he came along with some of his people and attacked the King.

The end result for both Hamlet and Laertes are the same. Claudius arranged a sword fight between hamlet and Laertes. Claudius and Laertes planned the death of Hamlet. Before the fight begins, Hamlet asks Laertes for forgiveness. He tells Laertes that he didn't kill his father intentionally; it was because of his madness. They started the sword fight and both were trying to hit at each other. After getting two or three hits from Hamlet, Laertes got angry and replaced his sword with the poison sword. Laertes attacked Hamlet from back and gives him wound with a poison sword. Hamlet find out that using poison sword was Claudius plan and he also mixed poison in the drink. Hamlet however manages to kill Claudius somehow before the poison spreads in his whole body. But at the end he dies because of being hit by the poison sword. On the other hand, Laertes also dies in the same fight. After poisoning his own sword to gain an unfair result, the swords were mixed up during the fight and Hamlet wounded him with his sword that caused Laertes death. At the end both of them gets what they wanted; their father's murderers are killed but apart from that they both had to lose their life in the same fight.

The differences in the background of their family and the environment they were raised in makes them different than each other. Laertes tries to save the future of her sister by telling her about the real face of hamlet. Laertes after hearing the news of his father death gets angry and attacked the castle, whereas hamlet patiently waits for the King to be in the lust of his sin so that he can kill him. They both end up being death in the play. Even though the death of hamlet was planned, the differences and similarities hamlet and Laertes have plays a vital role in the story of the play.
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