Undergraduate / Cornell's CAS Supplement - your current intellectual interests [8]

Hello Shlok Gilda- Please keep in mind that colleges often check application essays for plagiarism. After passing your essay through a plagiarism checking tool, it is quite clear you have lifted some of the paragraphs from another essay on this forum (I cannot post the link due to "Spam" restrictions). I suggest you REMOVE these sections COMPLETELY . Cornell will REJECT your application immediately if they come to realize that you have COPIED somebody else's work.

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Undergraduate / Cornell's CAS Supplement - your current intellectual interests [8]

7/10.

Some small pointers:
-"how some 14-year old has successfully defaced the website of a major corporation" - Will not be looked upon favorably by Adcoms- use something else to show your passion. Your passion for Comp sci does not come out strongly.

-You haven't mentioned enough about WHY Cornell's CAS is the right place for you. Mention specifics of the College. Needs some serious work.

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EssayAdvice