Graduate / Graduate Personal statement - MPH; St John's University (International Organizations) [4]

I see that you used the words "great exposure" twice, it would be better if you could reword it so it doesn't sound redundant. For example, "To add to that, their internship affiliation programs with different NGOs such as United Nations and World Health Organization is a great exposure to international strategies and tactics on how to deal with issues locally and globally." try "In addition, their internship affiliation programs with different NGOs such as United Nations and World Health Organization will further expose me to international strategies and tactics on how to deal with issues locally and globally. "

"I can see myself succeeding at Saint John's program, because it offers perspectives, motivation and challenges. I am looking at the broad range of classes that are offered and feeling motivated to comprehend the challenging courses that lay ahead of me." For this sentence you could try "I will succeed in this program because of the different perspectives it will give me as well as challenge and sharpen my skills."