Undergraduate / Transfer Essay from Community College; 'Cervial and Breast Cancer study' [2]

Please provide a statement that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve.

My education at x Community College has been altogether positive. However, my primary reason for transferring is to broaden my resources to attain higher education. With the pursuit of majoring in Neuroscience and becoming a Physician Assistant, I would best be suited in an environment with opportunities for research, studying abroad, and a pre health concentration.

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