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Name: Angelina Serrano
Joined: Aug 29, 2014
Last Post: Sep 5, 2014
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From: United States of America
School: Arizona State University

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acserran   
Aug 29, 2014
Graduate / 'inadvertent road' - Graduate admission essay for Master in Speech Language Pathology. [7]

I am applying to many different master programs and I need help revising my personal statement. It can only be 300 words so I have to keep it short and to the point. Any help would be appreciated. Thank you.

The journey to deciding what career I want to pursue has not been easy, but it is through this inadvertent road that I found the passion for the field in Speech Language Pathology (SLP). I have always had the desire to help others in need, which is why I pursued a Bachelor Degree in Applied Biological Science. After I graduated, I still was not certain which avenue to follow. As I researched different degrees, I came about the SLP program. One sentence that really caught my attention said, "If you are looking for a career that has a combination of health care, and education professions, this is the career for you". Instantly, I was assured this profession would help me make a difference in people's lives.

It was through my experience as an SLPA intern that I truly learned how speech impairments can affect someone's life so extensively. I had the privilege of working with children ages 2-14 years old, with a variety of disorders ranging from articulation/phonological conditions, to language and fluency disorders. One unforgettable experience is when I helped a client (Zorion) reach his articulation goal of pronouncing the phoneme /r/ in sentence form. Zorion had been working on this goal for months, and with a few of my personal techniques I helped him reach his goal in 4 sessions. When Zorion eagerly rushed down the hall with a huge smile on his face to inform his mother that he reached his goal I knew this was the rewarding career I desired.

The Speech and Hearing Science program was rigorous, but I feel that it prepared me for the challenges of the SLP Master program. It is my greatest ambition to become an educated, well-rounded SLP, and I know that Arizona State University will help me to achieve that.
acserran   
Sep 5, 2014
Graduate / 'inadvertent road' - Graduate admission essay for Master in Speech Language Pathology. [7]

I have used all of your suggestions. What do you think of the revisions? What needs to be worked on?

How often are you able to incorporate passion and profession in your career choice? As a Speech Language Pathologist you have the ability to improve the overall quality of life for children and adults by helping them acquire, improve, or regain their ability to communicate. I have always known I wanted a career in the health profession, which is why I pursued a Bachelor in Applied Biological Science. My senior year I researched different Master degrees, and I came about the SLP program. My advisor informed me that I first need to complete the pre-requisite courses. This is when I learned how extensively speech impairments can affect someone's life.

Could you imagine what life would be like if you could not communicate? The constant frustration and embarrassment could easily take over your life, and even alter your self-identity. That is no way to live, and I find great gratification knowing that as a SLP I could assist people to change their perspective on life by giving them the tools and skill sets they need to communicate more effectively. As a SLPA intern I had the privilege of helping a client (Zorion) reach his articulation goal of pronouncing the phoneme /r/ in sentence form. Zorion smiled from ear to ear as he ran eagerly down the hallway to inform his mother that he reached his goal. After his mother gave him a huge hug, he turned to look at me with tears in his eyes and said, "thank you Miss Angelina". At that exact moment I knew this was the rewarding career I desired.

I am eager to use my passion and enthusiasm to help clients reach their goals. It is my greatest ambition to become an educated, well-rounded SLP, and I know that Arizona State University will help me to achieve that.
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