Writing Feedback / Academic Writing IELTS about numbers of computer users - graph [4]

Task 1 is about the computer ownership showing gradually increasing graph from 2002 to 2010 in graph 1 and Computer ownership in educational level in year 2002 and in year 2010 from No high school diploma to Post graduate level

Task 2:

A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material
possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem
important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.

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Writing Feedback / How to control media so that they give the right opinions instead being inclined to some ideology? [NEW]

ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Write at least 250 words.

We as a people are highly influenced by the external sources which comes accross in our daily life. Everything in our surrounding has a role, affecting our behaviours. Among these media definitely plays a crucial role in determining how we behave in our general life.

in most extent its true that who ever controls the media controls the opinions and attitude of people. As what ever information we gather and our sources of knowledge is completely based on the media which have access on. The newspaper, internet sources, magazines are few to be mentioned.

The world itself is divided into several political opinions. Usually media is controlled by the people who are in the government at the given time. As for example usually democrats control the media reflecting their way of politics and when communist or republicians are in power they do in their own way.

Usually in Communist countries, the media is completely controlled by the government, so the people there do not have access to world wide informations. Their mind thus is cultivated to follow their government's ideology.

But people are being aware in most part of the world. They are being curious about the different systems of the world. To find the differences they analyze all available perspectives of the same news titles. Several movements take place when media willing provide false information to the general public.

To Summarize, its really a tough task to control the media so that they give the right opinions instead being inclined to some ideology. But we as a human have come and seen too many evidences from the history which makes us now able to judge what is right and what is wrong. We are who control our attitudes and opinions now.

Writing Feedback / Today we live in the world of competition and worries. IELTS Writing Academic [3]

In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Today we live in the world of competition and worries. We always fear of being lagging behind compared to others who surrounds us. We have to be first in everything whether it be in studies or possesing emenities and luxurious of life. These things dont come for free though. The price of everything is soaring high everyday. We hear the news of inflation, people complaining about it.

The only solution to sustain the family is both parents to go out to work. This generates moe income to cover the expenses of growing needs. Ofcourse, it has to be done as one member's income in an average family would not be enough to cover their children's expenses for school, house rent, fooding and so on. Children get opportunity to persue better education and grow up in a lavise life style.

But everything comes with good aspect and bad along with. Children at their early age learn things from their surrounding. Usually when both parents go out to work they are left behind with house keepers or at child care. It is not certain what kind of education they get there. Mostly is also results in distance of affection between children with their parents. They dont really care about their parents so much. When they come accross problems, they would find it comfortable to relay on their friends rather than their parents for support.

There are examples of my own friends and me myself. I was brought up in the family where my mother didn't work and looked after me till I grew up. I do have affection with my parents but I have my friends who were in hostel since very childhood. Now, they seldom care about their parents. It is kind of all the same to them.

In my opinion, as far as possible only one member should work in the family until the child is grown up as family matters the most. When it is really not possible to sustain with one member's income in such case we would not have an option but in anyway, children has to be looked upon. If you would not give time to your children during this childhood you would better not expect their attention during your old age.