Undergraduate / 'sitting on the steps of the Low Memorial Library' - Columbia University essay [6]

Please tell us what you find most appealing about Columbia and why. (300 words or less)

This is a very early rough draft of my Columbia essay. Can I get some suggestions before I move forward with this idea? Do you think its allowed to use more than one reason?

Thanks

New York City, the City that never sleeps, is filled with life and energy consistent with my perpetual academic curiosities. Countless resources, landmarks, and opportunities are only a short subway ride's reach away. Whether I'm visiting the countless museums or interning at Google's New York City headquarters, there are limitless possibilities to explore in a city so diverse and colorful.

When I first set foot on Columbia's stunning campus last summer, I immediately felt at home. The Greek amphitheater and classical architecture described in the Roman literature I read in Latin class came to life in front of my eyes. I could see myself sitting on the steps of the Low Memorial Library. I could see myself attending concerts in Low Plaza. (Not finished with this paragraph)

Columbia's unique take on education cannot be found anywhere else in the world. Columbia's 3-2 program offers an unparalleled education in both liberal arts and engineering, allowing me to not only study engineering but also become knowledgeable and informed in a variety of disciplines. Consequentially, Columbia University will prepare me for a future beyond engineering itself, a more impactful future as a leader, entrepreneur, and scholar.