Undergraduate / Is it better to live with a single parent than living with both in an uncomfortable relationship? [10]

Hi Gia, I agree with Sam. It's best to avoid mentioning divorce. However, if you do stick with this, don't capitalize FORTUNATELY or UNFORTUNATELY. It's not needed. Try to avoid using quotes. Remember, colleges want your writing, not someone else's! Watch out for your grammar- our family rarely went on vacations instead of what you wrote.