tallbuttiny
Nov 25, 2014
Undergraduate / A place where one is free from attack, where one experiences secure relationships and affirmation [2]
Hello May you guys please revise and give me some advice on how to perfect my personal essay thank you.
Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you do or experience there, and why is it meaningful to you?
A place where one is free from attack, a place where one experiences secure relationships and affirmation. It's a place where people share and understand each other. Its relationships are nurturing. The people in it do not need to be perfect; instead, they need to be honest, loving, supportive, recognizing a common humanity that makes all of us vulnerable. A home consists of childhood memories. Waking up to the sweet wonderful smell of pancakes being made in the kitchen, or being woken up by the chirping noises of birds. My home is where i feel perfectly content.
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Hello May you guys please revise and give me some advice on how to perfect my personal essay thank you.
Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you do or experience there, and why is it meaningful to you?
A place where one is free from attack, a place where one experiences secure relationships and affirmation. It's a place where people share and understand each other. Its relationships are nurturing. The people in it do not need to be perfect; instead, they need to be honest, loving, supportive, recognizing a common humanity that makes all of us vulnerable. A home consists of childhood memories. Waking up to the sweet wonderful smell of pancakes being made in the kitchen, or being woken up by the chirping noises of birds. My home is where i feel perfectly content.
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