albidealist9
Nov 30, 2014
Undergraduate / To me UWC, is transformational education at its best; Why UWC? International high school application [3]
Hey guys, this is my first Essayforum post so for. I need help to edit and omit some sentences. This is the prompt. For those who don't know UWC high schools are 14 high schools located in 14 countries around the world. UWC promotes multicultural understanding and celebration of differences.
1. Please write a few paragraphs explaining why you are interested in attending a UWC school/college. Reflect on UWC's mission and values, what you might contribute to the school/college if you are selected, and what you would hope to gain from the experience. NOTE: If you indicated a specific UWC in page 3, please explain your choice here. (Maximum 300 words) I have written 323 words.
This is my essay. Be as harsh as you can. Thanks in advance!
To me UWC, is transformational education at its best. Through its celebration of difference and promotion of understanding UWC will serve to me as a defining experience and a journey of self exploration. Through its demanding curriculum and the IB Diploma, UWC will help me to get the skills necessary for my future academic pursuits.
Besides academics to me UWC is also a place where I could pursue extracurricular activities and do community service. At UWC, I might have the opportunity to take the lead of certain clubs or groups related to my passions and I can learn how to become a leader. By serving to the community and to those in need I can enforce my sense of social responsibility and civic duty. Furthermore UWC is a place where I could enhance my abilities to communicate with people and to think learn to think globally. It is a place where I can truly become a global citizen.
There are several ways I may contribute to campus. By representing Albanian culture and traditions, I can help other students on campus gain an insight of Albanian culture, history and traditions. I can take responsibilities related to my extracurricular pursuits and community service. I can take leadership roles, take risks and embrace challenges.
I particularly indicated RCNUWC because I have always fancied Nordic countries and I have always been curious to discover their traditions. RCNUWC also reflects the humanitarian traditions of Red Cross, an organization I recently became part of. Last but not least, RCNUWC's picturesque campus is an ideal place to be for two years of my life.
I indicated UWC Mostar because I want to experience a unique opportunity to live in a post war society. Mostar is to me the ideal place to get lessons from the past. It is also a perfect place to interact with the local community, somehow still troubled by the past. That's what makes UWC Mostar so distinct for me.
Hey guys, this is my first Essayforum post so for. I need help to edit and omit some sentences. This is the prompt. For those who don't know UWC high schools are 14 high schools located in 14 countries around the world. UWC promotes multicultural understanding and celebration of differences.
1. Please write a few paragraphs explaining why you are interested in attending a UWC school/college. Reflect on UWC's mission and values, what you might contribute to the school/college if you are selected, and what you would hope to gain from the experience. NOTE: If you indicated a specific UWC in page 3, please explain your choice here. (Maximum 300 words) I have written 323 words.
This is my essay. Be as harsh as you can. Thanks in advance!
To me UWC, is transformational education at its best. Through its celebration of difference and promotion of understanding UWC will serve to me as a defining experience and a journey of self exploration. Through its demanding curriculum and the IB Diploma, UWC will help me to get the skills necessary for my future academic pursuits.
Besides academics to me UWC is also a place where I could pursue extracurricular activities and do community service. At UWC, I might have the opportunity to take the lead of certain clubs or groups related to my passions and I can learn how to become a leader. By serving to the community and to those in need I can enforce my sense of social responsibility and civic duty. Furthermore UWC is a place where I could enhance my abilities to communicate with people and to think learn to think globally. It is a place where I can truly become a global citizen.
There are several ways I may contribute to campus. By representing Albanian culture and traditions, I can help other students on campus gain an insight of Albanian culture, history and traditions. I can take responsibilities related to my extracurricular pursuits and community service. I can take leadership roles, take risks and embrace challenges.
I particularly indicated RCNUWC because I have always fancied Nordic countries and I have always been curious to discover their traditions. RCNUWC also reflects the humanitarian traditions of Red Cross, an organization I recently became part of. Last but not least, RCNUWC's picturesque campus is an ideal place to be for two years of my life.
I indicated UWC Mostar because I want to experience a unique opportunity to live in a post war society. Mostar is to me the ideal place to get lessons from the past. It is also a perfect place to interact with the local community, somehow still troubled by the past. That's what makes UWC Mostar so distinct for me.