spyr0xs
Dec 17, 2014
Undergraduate / NYU. A reality come true or just a dream school?- Help on my NYU supplement [5]
NYU is global, urban, inspired, smart, connected, and bold. What can NYU offer you, and what can you offer NYU? (200-400 words)
Hi guys, I'm not that great at strong vocabulary or writing in general. Any criticism is appreciated. Thanks! :D
Being at the heart of New York City, no university is comparable to NYU in attracting so many young, ambitious and aspiring adults from countless diverse background. As a first generation American-born Chinese, my goal is to become the bridge between young immigrants and American society through the medical field. Many times immigrants lack the medical attention they need because they don't fully understand how our country works or just simply lack the resources to seek help.
NYU can help me achieve this goal through their reputable academic research facilities as well as their strong connections with the real world. In the morning I could be attending a lecture about the anatomy of the human body, but later in the afternoon at an internship at a local hospital, I can see first hand how doctors and nurses applied what I learned into ways to save people's lives. NYU's Shanghai campus is also great way for me to further my ambitions by developing a deeper connection with my Chinese culture through the study abroad program. Being in a rising city in the global economy and largest in terms of population, NYU's Shanghai campus is is full of opportunities and discoveries no other university can provide.
As a student, my most promising traits are my determination and persistence. Hours and hours spent on the track running taught me that progress comes through persistence and determination. When I first tried out for my school's track team during my freshmen year, I could barely finish the mile that was required to make the team. I was denied a spot on the team. I trained every day for the entire summer and when tryouts took place again next year my training paid off and I was offered a spot on the team.
My determination and persistence will inspire those around me to work harder and achieve their goals. I have learned that it takes practice to excel, and passion to exceed. As an NYU student, no obstacle will stand in my way when I put my mind to it.
NYU is global, urban, inspired, smart, connected, and bold. What can NYU offer you, and what can you offer NYU? (200-400 words)
Hi guys, I'm not that great at strong vocabulary or writing in general. Any criticism is appreciated. Thanks! :D
Being at the heart of New York City, no university is comparable to NYU in attracting so many young, ambitious and aspiring adults from countless diverse background. As a first generation American-born Chinese, my goal is to become the bridge between young immigrants and American society through the medical field. Many times immigrants lack the medical attention they need because they don't fully understand how our country works or just simply lack the resources to seek help.
NYU can help me achieve this goal through their reputable academic research facilities as well as their strong connections with the real world. In the morning I could be attending a lecture about the anatomy of the human body, but later in the afternoon at an internship at a local hospital, I can see first hand how doctors and nurses applied what I learned into ways to save people's lives. NYU's Shanghai campus is also great way for me to further my ambitions by developing a deeper connection with my Chinese culture through the study abroad program. Being in a rising city in the global economy and largest in terms of population, NYU's Shanghai campus is is full of opportunities and discoveries no other university can provide.
As a student, my most promising traits are my determination and persistence. Hours and hours spent on the track running taught me that progress comes through persistence and determination. When I first tried out for my school's track team during my freshmen year, I could barely finish the mile that was required to make the team. I was denied a spot on the team. I trained every day for the entire summer and when tryouts took place again next year my training paid off and I was offered a spot on the team.
My determination and persistence will inspire those around me to work harder and achieve their goals. I have learned that it takes practice to excel, and passion to exceed. As an NYU student, no obstacle will stand in my way when I put my mind to it.