cbuddy
Jul 5, 2009
Writing Feedback / Leaders in my life (16 years so far) [8]
CAN ANYONE TELL ME WHAT I SHOULD TAKE OUT OR ADD TO THIS ESSAY. IT CAN ONLY BE 100-150 WORDS SO I CANT ADD MUCH MORE.
THANX
Through my sixteen years of living, I have encountered various leaders. However, none has influenced me quite like my father, Donald Isler. Many people might argue that your father is your average role model, but my father is nothing like the average. My father taught me to strive for the best, and anything worth having is worth working for. He has always stressed the importance of getting a good education. He regularly tells me, "Without an education, you have nothing." I have withheld these words with me threw all of my education. I admire my father not only for his actions, but more of what he represents, a strong father/husband.
CAN ANYONE TELL ME WHAT I SHOULD TAKE OUT OR ADD TO THIS ESSAY. IT CAN ONLY BE 100-150 WORDS SO I CANT ADD MUCH MORE.
THANX
Through my sixteen years of living, I have encountered various leaders. However, none has influenced me quite like my father, Donald Isler. Many people might argue that your father is your average role model, but my father is nothing like the average. My father taught me to strive for the best, and anything worth having is worth working for. He has always stressed the importance of getting a good education. He regularly tells me, "Without an education, you have nothing." I have withheld these words with me threw all of my education. I admire my father not only for his actions, but more of what he represents, a strong father/husband.
