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Aug 8, 2009
Poetry / "Winter Day", "Fall" - Review My Poems. [8]

Several things. In the poem titled "Fall," who is the speaker in the poem, also, who is the "we?" This is important to know because you bring in the "we" all of a sudden in the last stanza. Also, where is the speaker? In the first stanza, it seems as though they re inside, then in the second stanza they are walking out side.
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