trangthuynguyen
Oct 18, 2016
Writing Feedback / As Iraqi and coalition forces invade Mosul, the last ISIS stronghold in Iraq [2]
here is my opinions, hope it's useful for you:
-a million people >> millions of people
-you can use "evacuate" instead of "move to safe place"
here is my opinions, hope it's useful for you:
-a million people >> millions of people
-you can use "evacuate" instead of "move to safe place"
