Undergraduate / Tell us something you do for your own pleasure. (sketching and reading) [5]

We know you lead busy lives, full of activities, many of which are required of you. Tell us something you do for your own pleasure.

this is my topic i wrote two entries. which one do you think is better? should i include one or both of them? if i should include both (because that is what i want) how should i make it short and which extra things should i cut?

please help.

1.Life now is busy. People have their own ways to enjoy themselves. To me reading a good book is the best way to relax after a studious and a hectic routine. The delight of reading books, to me, is incomparable to the one obtain from any other activity specially After eight stressful school hours, I can't think of anything but lying on the bed with a book light, a quilt, and a beloved book It transports me to an entirely different world. Magic, is what I must say, happens every time I turn the crisp pages of an unread book.

2.Drawing and sketching has travelled with me since childhood. Every time my pencil strikes the canvas with an artistic intent it gives me pleasure and makes me a completely different person with a new perspective. I love playing with different shades of black and grey which gives my piece a unique charm and add to my personal sense of achievement. My drawings become a medium through which I can communicate and speak without having to open my mouth; I can express myself and say things that I want to say.

i also listen to kpop watch kdramas and animes read mangas. should i include them too? one of my friend was like yeah you should. any help?