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Nov 23, 2016
Undergraduate / My greatest talent or skill: Dance/Choreography. Why is this meaningful to you? [3]
Hi! Could someone help me and critique what I wrote? I would really appreciate any feedback! Thank you!!!
What would you say is your greatest talent or skill? How have you developed and demonstrated that talent over time?
Things to consider: If there's a talent or skill that you're proud of, this is the time to share it. You don't necessarily have to be recognized or have received awards for your talent (although if you did and you want to talk about it, feel free to do so). Why is this talent or skill meaningful to you?
I love to dance, although I wasn't born with natural flexibility, beautiful turnout, great feet, or a ballerina's body. I've been able to overcome these challenges by stretching, practicing every day, working on artistry, and choreographing creative pieces. Dance is my release and a big part of who I am. I never tire of it even when my body aches or when my parents sigh over having to drive me to class.
I've learned to use dance to tell stories without words. I enjoy creating pieces of art and seeing my ideas become realities when I choreograph. I've done six pieces and the most rewarding is my "Body Love" dance, which was extremely challenging because it was so personal and forced me to be open and vulnerable. I tried to express how my worst fear wasn't spiders or monsters but rather the mirror as it was a blatant reflection of my flaws as seen by my favorite craft. Dance, specifically ballet, idealizes a praying mantis-like physique and I have a more muscular frame. As disparities between my body and the prima ballerinas' figures became evident, I began to dread ballet class and being told I don't have a dancer's body. Though my dance, I wanted to share my struggle with bodily insecurities. The ability I have as a dancer to convey a story on stage is what makes my art special to me. It's incredibly rewarding spreading the message that anyone can dance and be good at what they're passionate about.
My highlight is when I performed a Chinese cultural dance on television in Beijing. Combining my identity with my favorite activity was very rewarding. I'm also very proud of competing in Youth American Grand Prix, the largest dance competition in the world. One of the few to make the finals in New York, I was surprised since many of the competitors practice 40 hours per week. I'm also honored that I earned the position of captain on my school's dance team since I started out as a timid freshman. Through that role, I developed my leadership skills.
I hope to expand into a greater variety of dance styles and continue to express my creativity through choreographing. I want to inspire dancers to reach for their goals whether or not other people believe in them.
Dance has taught me a lesson I will remember for the rest of my life: Hard work beats talent any day...work hard, dream big and you will see results.
Hi! Could someone help me and critique what I wrote? I would really appreciate any feedback! Thank you!!!
What would you say is your greatest talent or skill? How have you developed and demonstrated that talent over time?
Things to consider: If there's a talent or skill that you're proud of, this is the time to share it. You don't necessarily have to be recognized or have received awards for your talent (although if you did and you want to talk about it, feel free to do so). Why is this talent or skill meaningful to you?
I love to dance, although I wasn't born with natural flexibility, beautiful turnout, great feet, or a ballerina's body. I've been able to overcome these challenges by stretching, practicing every day, working on artistry, and choreographing creative pieces. Dance is my release and a big part of who I am. I never tire of it even when my body aches or when my parents sigh over having to drive me to class.
I've learned to use dance to tell stories without words. I enjoy creating pieces of art and seeing my ideas become realities when I choreograph. I've done six pieces and the most rewarding is my "Body Love" dance, which was extremely challenging because it was so personal and forced me to be open and vulnerable. I tried to express how my worst fear wasn't spiders or monsters but rather the mirror as it was a blatant reflection of my flaws as seen by my favorite craft. Dance, specifically ballet, idealizes a praying mantis-like physique and I have a more muscular frame. As disparities between my body and the prima ballerinas' figures became evident, I began to dread ballet class and being told I don't have a dancer's body. Though my dance, I wanted to share my struggle with bodily insecurities. The ability I have as a dancer to convey a story on stage is what makes my art special to me. It's incredibly rewarding spreading the message that anyone can dance and be good at what they're passionate about.
My highlight is when I performed a Chinese cultural dance on television in Beijing. Combining my identity with my favorite activity was very rewarding. I'm also very proud of competing in Youth American Grand Prix, the largest dance competition in the world. One of the few to make the finals in New York, I was surprised since many of the competitors practice 40 hours per week. I'm also honored that I earned the position of captain on my school's dance team since I started out as a timid freshman. Through that role, I developed my leadership skills.
I hope to expand into a greater variety of dance styles and continue to express my creativity through choreographing. I want to inspire dancers to reach for their goals whether or not other people believe in them.
Dance has taught me a lesson I will remember for the rest of my life: Hard work beats talent any day...work hard, dream big and you will see results.
