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Dec 30, 2016
Writing Feedback / The proportion of proficient persons in a foreign language among male and female students [2]
Can someone help correct task 1 ielts & give some synonym
The chart illustrate the proportion of proficient in foreign language in male and female student in different nation in 2016.
Overall, the number of females proficient were much higher than the number of males in India, Romania, Vietnam and China. While, there was a different figure in Thailand.
Among 6 countries demonstrated, 3 countries had the most striking rates in both genders. India reaches the highest point of female undergraduates skillful in foreign languages, accounted for 68% and 56% for males. Followed by that of female versus male in Romania, vietnam and russia, were 64% versus 42%, 56% versus 39% and 43% versus 35%, respectively.
In china, the rate of female was approximately 31%, it was nearly two-fold than the figure for males. In contrast, the number of males proficient were higher than that of females in Thailand. However, the difference is very small, which was 6 (32% of males versus 27% females)
Can someone help correct task 1 ielts & give some synonym
The chart illustrate the proportion of proficient in foreign language in male and female student in different nation in 2016.
Overall, the number of females proficient were much higher than the number of males in India, Romania, Vietnam and China. While, there was a different figure in Thailand.
Among 6 countries demonstrated, 3 countries had the most striking rates in both genders. India reaches the highest point of female undergraduates skillful in foreign languages, accounted for 68% and 56% for males. Followed by that of female versus male in Romania, vietnam and russia, were 64% versus 42%, 56% versus 39% and 43% versus 35%, respectively.
In china, the rate of female was approximately 31%, it was nearly two-fold than the figure for males. In contrast, the number of males proficient were higher than that of females in Thailand. However, the difference is very small, which was 6 (32% of males versus 27% females)
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