emilysimpson
Aug 22, 2009
Writing Feedback / 'Given name from God' - UNC- Chapel Hill College Essay [4]
Since interviews are not apart of our admissions consderation, you have the option of including any additional information beyond the scope of this application which you would like the Admissions Committee to consider with your application.
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My God given name is Emily Janelle Simpson. I am seventeen years old and currently a senior at Indian Land High School in Indian Land, South Carolina. I am pretty much an average teenager. I enjoy texting, eating, shopping, listening to music, dancing, writing poetry, and speding time with my family and friends. Family is a huge value in my life. I spend alot of time wth my mom, who is my hero, role model, guidance, and my best friend. She nt only inspires me to make goals but she pushe me to strive and achieve every one of them.
When I am not in school or participating in my extra curricurlar activities you can usually find me at work. During the school year I am an employee at Wendy's which I have been employed at for about a year and a half. Working at Wendy's has taught me a lot formmoney management, to team- work,to customer service. If you come into Wendy's nyoucan usually find me taking orders in the drive thru or a the front register. My goal as a cashier i y customers satisfactory ane making sure their visit is te best. During the summer I am employed as a Camp Couselor at the YMCA. I would have to saytis s my favorite and i have been there for about three years. I work with four and five year olds, so i spend alot of the day on the field playing games, at the play ground, at the swimming pool, or cooling down the day with circle time as we discuss our character trait of the day. I strive to make an impact on every one of my campers lives, as our goal at the YMCA is to put christian principles into pratice to build a healthy sprit, mind, and body for all, which has brought me alot of courage, respect, and responsibility.
Three goas that I hace made for myself that I am looking forward to in the upcoming year are finishing high school, graduating with honors, and attending college in the spring. It seems like only yesterday I was stepping into Freshman Orientation. I hope to attend college and major in pre-law. I have worked hard throughout my high school years and although I have encountered some battles, my faith has allowed me to over come them. I think college will help prepare me for the future,as I step into my adulthood.
The main reason I hope to attend college is because I will be in the first in this generation of my family to attend. Attendng college, I hope to inspire my siblings as well as my cousins to do well in school so that they can get a good education, be succesful in life, so that can get things in life that their parents and family members were not able to have.
Since interviews are not apart of our admissions consderation, you have the option of including any additional information beyond the scope of this application which you would like the Admissions Committee to consider with your application.
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My God given name is Emily Janelle Simpson. I am seventeen years old and currently a senior at Indian Land High School in Indian Land, South Carolina. I am pretty much an average teenager. I enjoy texting, eating, shopping, listening to music, dancing, writing poetry, and speding time with my family and friends. Family is a huge value in my life. I spend alot of time wth my mom, who is my hero, role model, guidance, and my best friend. She nt only inspires me to make goals but she pushe me to strive and achieve every one of them.
When I am not in school or participating in my extra curricurlar activities you can usually find me at work. During the school year I am an employee at Wendy's which I have been employed at for about a year and a half. Working at Wendy's has taught me a lot formmoney management, to team- work,to customer service. If you come into Wendy's nyoucan usually find me taking orders in the drive thru or a the front register. My goal as a cashier i y customers satisfactory ane making sure their visit is te best. During the summer I am employed as a Camp Couselor at the YMCA. I would have to saytis s my favorite and i have been there for about three years. I work with four and five year olds, so i spend alot of the day on the field playing games, at the play ground, at the swimming pool, or cooling down the day with circle time as we discuss our character trait of the day. I strive to make an impact on every one of my campers lives, as our goal at the YMCA is to put christian principles into pratice to build a healthy sprit, mind, and body for all, which has brought me alot of courage, respect, and responsibility.
Three goas that I hace made for myself that I am looking forward to in the upcoming year are finishing high school, graduating with honors, and attending college in the spring. It seems like only yesterday I was stepping into Freshman Orientation. I hope to attend college and major in pre-law. I have worked hard throughout my high school years and although I have encountered some battles, my faith has allowed me to over come them. I think college will help prepare me for the future,as I step into my adulthood.
The main reason I hope to attend college is because I will be in the first in this generation of my family to attend. Attendng college, I hope to inspire my siblings as well as my cousins to do well in school so that they can get a good education, be succesful in life, so that can get things in life that their parents and family members were not able to have.
