Graduate / An Email to Preferred Supervisor - Requirement to apply Master Degree in Japan [7]

I am struggling to make my first contact with professor, especially I do not have any experience to communicate with japanese. Help me please to correct this email and maybe you can also give tips for emailing in academic context.

first contact with an educator

Dear Professor xxxxxxx,

I graduated from xxx university in xxx with a Bachelor's degree xxx, in 2015. I am considering applying to International Course in Urban and Regional Development in xxx university with focus on area in urban and regional planning.

I have read some journal articles that you as well as your research team wrote. I really enjoyed it, especially I have done studying the similar community development problem, which is the level of capacity stakeholders in xxx, as an undergraduate's student. Among these articles, xxx, which its whole content is comprehensive enough, is the one that drawing my attention to design my future research.

Actually one of my special interest is about tourism planning which I urge to study specifically in urban planning contexts, such as infrastructure and policies. I have explored this interest intensely in college and at work which makes my speciality more determined as an urban planner. My research idea relate with The Identification Elements in Urban Areas to promote Tourism Competitiveness.

I believe that through your supervision and with the help of your research team, my future research could be widely beneficial.

I hope you do not mind that I would like to inquire whether you think it would be possible to bring this line research.
If it is proper, would you willing to give me a bit more advice about applying this course. If you have any further questions, please contact me using the information below.

I am looking forward to your response soon, thank you.

Regard,
xxx