elizabethnovi
Mar 6, 2017
Scholarship / A LITTLE GIRL WITH A BIG DREAM - Self of Introduction, KGSP 2017 [5]
Hello! I'm applying for 2017 KGSP Scholarship and I need to write self of introduction.
This is my first time, I have no idea about my grammar, structure and I don't know how make it completely easy to understand. Can you please review it for me? Thank you!
I have born with two brothers, older and younger. It makes me thinking so rationally, and since my parents have a relationship problem, I found my mother so independent then here I am, I grew to be a rational and very independent woman.
On my 2nd year of college, I'm being the leader for Assemblage of Architecture's Student which is so rare for woman. I realized that I have strong ambitions and become person who wants to solve everything. Sometimes, it grows to my weakness. But not just that, I'm addicted to working in a team. Being a leader make me learn how to make the best option, not the perfect one but the best than other alternative. From this case, I acquire to apply the system into my life, rather than disappoint if there is no one perfect, I choose the best option which has lesser negative think. In the same year, I use to join for redaction of university's newsletter. I love to write and design some layout so I start from being reporter, editor and the final is being a setter (someone who arranged the final layout for each page). Become reporter lead me to deal with people, growing my communication skill to every age and all profession.
My personalities take me to engineering world that need more realistic analysis than a feeling. During my study on Architecture Engineering major, I found my passion for building science which is talking about energy and materials that affect to the building and environment. As my concern on green building and the requirement of it on the future, I want to continue my study on that field.
From 7th semester I take a part for being assistant lecturer, and from this semester I take the subject that I want to focus on, Materials Technology, Building Physic and Architecture and Energy. Be a part for that subjects confirm my desire for study about Energy and Materials Engineering, I want to learn how to maximizing technology for renewable energy but compatible with culture and materials where it is build. I have ever join service learning program in Rote, the southernmost island in Indonesia, and my supervisor always told us that we must contribute for a better things not create a truly new one which the community doesn't feel familiar. By considering what community work on and what materials do exist are create sustainable system.
The main reason why I want to study in Korea is not far from my experience. For my undergraduate degree, I got scholarship from Scranton's Women Leadership Center who based on Seoul. Since that, I have a big attention for Korea. I got scholarship for the two last year for my degree, two years too I have searching about Korea and how life is going on there. In my view, Korea is one of the developed countries in Asia who has many building and department or company who used work in energy or materials engineering field. Not only that, the chance I visit Korea on 2016 made me sure I must to learn there. Korea has culture that similar to Indonesia. In my 24 years life on Indonesia, I understand very much how some culture affect the system is going on. I'm very excited to know how Korean build something modern and makes it going smoothly and correctly without neglect the traditional culture.
Hello! I'm applying for 2017 KGSP Scholarship and I need to write self of introduction.
This is my first time, I have no idea about my grammar, structure and I don't know how make it completely easy to understand. Can you please review it for me? Thank you!
A LITTLE GIRL WITH A BIG DREAM
I have born with two brothers, older and younger. It makes me thinking so rationally, and since my parents have a relationship problem, I found my mother so independent then here I am, I grew to be a rational and very independent woman.
On my 2nd year of college, I'm being the leader for Assemblage of Architecture's Student which is so rare for woman. I realized that I have strong ambitions and become person who wants to solve everything. Sometimes, it grows to my weakness. But not just that, I'm addicted to working in a team. Being a leader make me learn how to make the best option, not the perfect one but the best than other alternative. From this case, I acquire to apply the system into my life, rather than disappoint if there is no one perfect, I choose the best option which has lesser negative think. In the same year, I use to join for redaction of university's newsletter. I love to write and design some layout so I start from being reporter, editor and the final is being a setter (someone who arranged the final layout for each page). Become reporter lead me to deal with people, growing my communication skill to every age and all profession.
My personalities take me to engineering world that need more realistic analysis than a feeling. During my study on Architecture Engineering major, I found my passion for building science which is talking about energy and materials that affect to the building and environment. As my concern on green building and the requirement of it on the future, I want to continue my study on that field.
From 7th semester I take a part for being assistant lecturer, and from this semester I take the subject that I want to focus on, Materials Technology, Building Physic and Architecture and Energy. Be a part for that subjects confirm my desire for study about Energy and Materials Engineering, I want to learn how to maximizing technology for renewable energy but compatible with culture and materials where it is build. I have ever join service learning program in Rote, the southernmost island in Indonesia, and my supervisor always told us that we must contribute for a better things not create a truly new one which the community doesn't feel familiar. By considering what community work on and what materials do exist are create sustainable system.
The main reason why I want to study in Korea is not far from my experience. For my undergraduate degree, I got scholarship from Scranton's Women Leadership Center who based on Seoul. Since that, I have a big attention for Korea. I got scholarship for the two last year for my degree, two years too I have searching about Korea and how life is going on there. In my view, Korea is one of the developed countries in Asia who has many building and department or company who used work in energy or materials engineering field. Not only that, the chance I visit Korea on 2016 made me sure I must to learn there. Korea has culture that similar to Indonesia. In my 24 years life on Indonesia, I understand very much how some culture affect the system is going on. I'm very excited to know how Korean build something modern and makes it going smoothly and correctly without neglect the traditional culture.
