Scholarship / NZAS scholarship : Why did you decide to apply to study in New Zealand or other Pacific location? [5]

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Why did you decide to apply to study in New Zealand or other Pacific location? (max. 250 words)

Renewable energy in Indonesia, relations with New Zealand

New Zealand has a long and successful history in the development of renewable energy resources. There is now some growth in research funding, strong participation in research by industry partners, and the training and courses in New Zealand. I believe if I propose the study in New Zealand I will increase my capacity in developing the technology and manage renewable energy in my country. It gives me the chance to gain knowledge directly from well-known experts in New Zealand. It will support the Indonesian Government`s plans to increase its energy production by providing specialized engineers in Indonesia. Friendly relations between Indonesia and New Zealand that have been continuous over the past decades also giving a lot of opportunities to study for Indonesian student like me.

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