dreamof90
Mar 16, 2017
Writing Feedback / workers commuting to work. IELTS Writing Task 1 - Paraphrasing INTRODUCTION [4]
@Holt
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Allocated is the chart revealing how many workers on the average have commuted everyday by three different means of transport, namely car, bus and train over the course of 60 years starting in 1970 in the United Kingdom.
@Holt
This is my very first time asking question in this forum. Thank you for your helpful answer. I learnt a lot from your idea.
I just attached a image which is the full question. I prefer writing one-sentence introduction, so please correct my answer. Thank you for your kindness!!!
Allocated is the chart revealing how many workers on the average have commuted everyday by three different means of transport, namely car, bus and train over the course of 60 years starting in 1970 in the United Kingdom.
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