Letters / Reconsidering my application - how to write a good appeal for sdsu? [3]

Becoming a Part of the Aztec Family

To Whom It May Concern:

Hi, my name is Tammy T. I am contacting you in regards to my admission denial to San Diego State University. I am writing this appeal because I feel that I am an extremely qualified candidate for admissions in the Business Administration major. It has been my long time ambition to study at, and graduate from, San Diego State University. Since you strongly promote that your business program is great , that is why I think it would be the perfect place for me to pursue my business major. San Diego State University is a school close to home and the only school I saw myself going to at the start of my high school career. My desire to attend a college close to my hometown means a lot to me and can help with my success and growth as a student and individual since I will have a support system at home which will motivate me.

-Growing up I have attended San Diego State University's campus for family graduations, concerts, Aztec volleyball games, and have visited the campus on a college day tour. It is a campus that I am comfortable at and see myself going to school at. I see it like my second home.

Something unique about San Diego State University....

My first semester of senior year was very bumpy and stressful. I juggled essays, college applications, extracurriculars and family situations outside of school. I have managed to keep myself paced and increase my GPA up this semester.

With a business degree I plan on opening my own business

Thank you in advance for reconsidering my application. I am committed to doing whatever it takes to be a part of the Aztec family. If you require additional information or support for my application, please don't hesitate to contact me at trantammy27 or (619) ***.

Sincerely,

Tammy T