amra125
Aug 23, 2017
Writing Feedback / Travel with a Companion or Travel Alone? [2]
Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
It is for my school's proficiency exams. It is similar to IELTS task 2. Thanks.
Instruction: Try to show that your written English is good enough for university study.
(Do not, for example, use only very short, simple sentences.)
Choice Travel
Everyone thinks that a lot of people do not like to travel alone. People need a friend for a good trip. However, this idea has wrong sides. Some people like to travel with a companion, contrast to this some people like to travel alone. Both of these has different advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly, a person who prefers to travel alone can focus on himself on the way. An individual who is travelling alone can do whatever he wants to do. For instance, he can watch series and think about his life or a situation. However, it can be boring after some hours. If he bored, he would search for a friend. If he has a friend on the road, he can talk various subjects with his friend.
Secondly, on a long trip people who are travelling together can have different sleeping and eating habits. Some people prefer to sleep early than normal on a long journey. Other people prefer to sleep regularly. What is the logic of travelling together if my friend sleeps when I am awake. Also, in a long trip, eating habits become more important than regular because you will not have numerous options on a long trip like you have in your city. If you travel alone, you will be free to choose your eating and sleeping habits.
As a result, people can prefer to travel alone or with a friend. If someone travel alone, he will have freedom, also he can be bored. If someone travels with a companion, he can spend time more right with his friend. Also, he will lose to choice some important things. I think travelling alone is much better than travelling with a friend because of freedom of choice.
Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
It is for my school's proficiency exams. It is similar to IELTS task 2. Thanks.
Instruction: Try to show that your written English is good enough for university study.
(Do not, for example, use only very short, simple sentences.)
Choice Travel
Everyone thinks that a lot of people do not like to travel alone. People need a friend for a good trip. However, this idea has wrong sides. Some people like to travel with a companion, contrast to this some people like to travel alone. Both of these has different advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly, a person who prefers to travel alone can focus on himself on the way. An individual who is travelling alone can do whatever he wants to do. For instance, he can watch series and think about his life or a situation. However, it can be boring after some hours. If he bored, he would search for a friend. If he has a friend on the road, he can talk various subjects with his friend.
Secondly, on a long trip people who are travelling together can have different sleeping and eating habits. Some people prefer to sleep early than normal on a long journey. Other people prefer to sleep regularly. What is the logic of travelling together if my friend sleeps when I am awake. Also, in a long trip, eating habits become more important than regular because you will not have numerous options on a long trip like you have in your city. If you travel alone, you will be free to choose your eating and sleeping habits.
As a result, people can prefer to travel alone or with a friend. If someone travel alone, he will have freedom, also he can be bored. If someone travels with a companion, he can spend time more right with his friend. Also, he will lose to choice some important things. I think travelling alone is much better than travelling with a friend because of freedom of choice.
