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Aug 23, 2017
Writing Feedback / [TOEFL] Globalisation worldwide effect - similarities in different countries [2]
Topic: Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
With technologic developments, people can reach out anything easily. People can access any laptop, car or food from long-distance countries. It can be an excellent opportunity for everyone. However, it has some negative aspects such as to cause monopolisation and killing the local business.
The first negative effect of globalisation is that it is killing the local business. These days, a company which has money and power can spread easily all over the world. If a company spread all over the world, other small business which are selling similar products in the country will affect harmful. For instance, when a corporation who is selling vegetables and fruits enter the market in a country, a food supplier sell in the country will be affected harmfully. A company will sell the similar vegetables on half price. So that, a food supplier will be bankrupt.
The second negative effect of globalisation is that it causes monopolisation. When a company has too much power, it does not allow to grow enterprises that do the same job with this company. It is always good to have opponent firms for us. Also, monopolisation leads do not care about us because they are the one option for us. For instance, UberEats which is a firm delivery food changed their mediation fees %3 to %10 less than one year. After that restaurants increased their food prices and today, we should buy food more expensive than the past.
As a result, to able to buy the same products can be seen a good opportunity for us. However, it comes with a lot of issue like monopolisation and killing the local business. We should consider negative sides of this and take action about it.
Topic: Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
United World
With technologic developments, people can reach out anything easily. People can access any laptop, car or food from long-distance countries. It can be an excellent opportunity for everyone. However, it has some negative aspects such as to cause monopolisation and killing the local business.
The first negative effect of globalisation is that it is killing the local business. These days, a company which has money and power can spread easily all over the world. If a company spread all over the world, other small business which are selling similar products in the country will affect harmful. For instance, when a corporation who is selling vegetables and fruits enter the market in a country, a food supplier sell in the country will be affected harmfully. A company will sell the similar vegetables on half price. So that, a food supplier will be bankrupt.
The second negative effect of globalisation is that it causes monopolisation. When a company has too much power, it does not allow to grow enterprises that do the same job with this company. It is always good to have opponent firms for us. Also, monopolisation leads do not care about us because they are the one option for us. For instance, UberEats which is a firm delivery food changed their mediation fees %3 to %10 less than one year. After that restaurants increased their food prices and today, we should buy food more expensive than the past.
As a result, to able to buy the same products can be seen a good opportunity for us. However, it comes with a lot of issue like monopolisation and killing the local business. We should consider negative sides of this and take action about it.
