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Sep 8, 2017
Writing Feedback / Essay about the benefit of internet [5]
Hallo, I wold like to shere my practice of writing essay to you, i hope you guys can help me to corect my mistake in comment section down bellow.
Internet was the example of the modern texnology taht maded by human. Internet was very helpfull for every sector in the world. In this era, Internet become a vital accomodation to everyone because almost every single work and actifities that we made need internet. Therefore, let's take a a look of the adventiges of the internet.
Firsly, internet can help us to communicate to each other no matter wherever you are or whenevr you are, you always can conunicate to your family or friends every singgle time. Moreover, we can easily to interaction with our family just by sending massage or by email to shering our experience and telling about our condition or etc.
Second, internet giving accommodation to increase and expand our knowledges to help us in social life. Information was provided on internet everyday so very easy to having a new information or news that happening not only in our country but olso in another country.
Thridly, in modern era, everything is possible to do such marketing and treading. In the past, we need to come to the traditional market to sell our product or beverage, but in modern era such now, we could selling product at home without going to anywhere. You need just post you product into internet service like instagram or tweeter or maybe aplocation such buybuyonline or anything that internet vasilitated to you.
In comclution, every singgle action that we made probably can not be detached from internet because internet helping in every sector in our life. Anyway, we have to thankfull everyone that finding internet.
Hallo, I wold like to shere my practice of writing essay to you, i hope you guys can help me to corect my mistake in comment section down bellow.
The benefit of internet
Internet was the example of the modern texnology taht maded by human. Internet was very helpfull for every sector in the world. In this era, Internet become a vital accomodation to everyone because almost every single work and actifities that we made need internet. Therefore, let's take a a look of the adventiges of the internet.
Firsly, internet can help us to communicate to each other no matter wherever you are or whenevr you are, you always can conunicate to your family or friends every singgle time. Moreover, we can easily to interaction with our family just by sending massage or by email to shering our experience and telling about our condition or etc.
Second, internet giving accommodation to increase and expand our knowledges to help us in social life. Information was provided on internet everyday so very easy to having a new information or news that happening not only in our country but olso in another country.
Thridly, in modern era, everything is possible to do such marketing and treading. In the past, we need to come to the traditional market to sell our product or beverage, but in modern era such now, we could selling product at home without going to anywhere. You need just post you product into internet service like instagram or tweeter or maybe aplocation such buybuyonline or anything that internet vasilitated to you.
In comclution, every singgle action that we made probably can not be detached from internet because internet helping in every sector in our life. Anyway, we have to thankfull everyone that finding internet.
