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Name: Jenna B
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Sep 14, 2017
Undergraduate / Storyteller. MIT Admission Essay - Something you do for the pleasure of it. [5]

I'm not actually sure where the "I have fun doing it" part came from. That wasn't in the essay when I copied it.

But I think the different use of the word storyteller makes the essay kind of unique but if it is misleading in a wrong way I will consider changing it.

The "I am a storyteller" is actually supposed to be in a paragraph by itself as you suggested.

Thank you for your feedback and sorry for the weird formatting
jenna8765   
Sep 14, 2017
Undergraduate / Storyteller. MIT Admission Essay - Something you do for the pleasure of it. [5]

We know you lead a busy life, full of activities, many of which are required of you. Tell us about something you do for the pleasure of it.(*)(100 words or fewer):

I have fun doing it



I am a storyteller. When I was eight years old, my father came home with a bulky gray camera and a box of colorful floppy disks. I would spend the next few months capturing meaningful moments in my life, filling the disks with dogs, birthday cakes, and friendships.These first few photographs taught me that words are unnecessary. Stories are told through my viewfinder; emotions are captured, and every detail is stored. I still carry a camera with me everywhere I go, constantly searching the landscape for a new narrative.
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