jenna8765
Sep 14, 2017
Undergraduate / Storyteller. MIT Admission Essay - Something you do for the pleasure of it. [5]
I'm not actually sure where the "I have fun doing it" part came from. That wasn't in the essay when I copied it.
But I think the different use of the word storyteller makes the essay kind of unique but if it is misleading in a wrong way I will consider changing it.
The "I am a storyteller" is actually supposed to be in a paragraph by itself as you suggested.
Thank you for your feedback and sorry for the weird formatting
I'm not actually sure where the "I have fun doing it" part came from. That wasn't in the essay when I copied it.
But I think the different use of the word storyteller makes the essay kind of unique but if it is misleading in a wrong way I will consider changing it.
The "I am a storyteller" is actually supposed to be in a paragraph by itself as you suggested.
Thank you for your feedback and sorry for the weird formatting