YuxinGuan
Oct 30, 2017
Undergraduate / Linear Humans - Columbia Engineering Why School [3]
@Holt
Thank you so much for your comments!
@Holt
Thank you so much for your comments!
YuxinGuan
Oct 30, 2017
Undergraduate / Being Chinese and adopted set me apart from others, even in my own family. Common App Essay [4]
However, my battle slowly came to an end as the thoughts of loneliness became superficial and irrelevant.
I think the transition here is a bit sudden. You need more examples to show how you've changed.
Other than that, it's a very good essay.
However, my battle slowly came to an end as the thoughts of loneliness became superficial and irrelevant.
I think the transition here is a bit sudden. You need more examples to show how you've changed.
Other than that, it's a very good essay.
YuxinGuan
Oct 29, 2017
Undergraduate / Guitar player - Essay about an interest you have pursued outside academic classes [3]
Hi Uyen. You shouldn't use words like "therefore", "furthermore", "particularly" and made your essay looks like a TOEFL essay that's trying to prove a point. Instead, you should show your passion for guitar. I would suggest that you write a story happened between you and your guitar to make you essay more interesting to read.
Hi Uyen. You shouldn't use words like "therefore", "furthermore", "particularly" and made your essay looks like a TOEFL essay that's trying to prove a point. Instead, you should show your passion for guitar. I would suggest that you write a story happened between you and your guitar to make you essay more interesting to read.
YuxinGuan
Oct 29, 2017
Undergraduate / Linear Humans - Columbia Engineering Why School [3]
Please tell us what you value most about Columbia and why. (300 words or less)
"Humans are linear by nature - and technology is exponential." Futurist Ray Kurzweil stated in the Law of Accelerating Returns.
Under exponential growth, artificial intelligence will surpass human intelligence within this century. During the Kaggle Competitions, I found it astonishing how my laptop could make precise predictions after "learning" massive amount of data. I believe at the Gussman Labs, I can achieve more. Moreover, in the Department of APAM, I can explore the field of machine learning from three different perspectives: math, data science, and computer science. The introductory course COMS W4701 - Artificial Intelligence opens the door to this young and rapidly growing field, while the STEP summer program furthers my engagement in future-making by placing me with groups like Watson and DeepMind.
Yet sometimes we need go back to our linear human nature. As AI grows smarter and approaches human level, we need to hold on even tighter to our human values, and think about the politics and ethics of AI. The answer, missing from traditional engineering curricula, lies in the book list of Contemporary Civilization in Columbia's unique Engineering Core. Closely examining Foucault's Discipline and Punishment, I can develop a deeper understanding of justice, and put a human touch in the algorithm of parole and sentencing decisions. Perusing Hume's An Enquiry Concerning Human Understandings, I can unravel how machine "thinks" and take AI technology to the next level.
In this era of fast development, infinite possibilities lie at my feet. Only with Columbia's light, can I unravel the path that leads to the person who I want to be.
Any change or advice would be much appreciated!!
Please tell us what you value most about Columbia and why. (300 words or less)
linear human nature
"Humans are linear by nature - and technology is exponential." Futurist Ray Kurzweil stated in the Law of Accelerating Returns.
Under exponential growth, artificial intelligence will surpass human intelligence within this century. During the Kaggle Competitions, I found it astonishing how my laptop could make precise predictions after "learning" massive amount of data. I believe at the Gussman Labs, I can achieve more. Moreover, in the Department of APAM, I can explore the field of machine learning from three different perspectives: math, data science, and computer science. The introductory course COMS W4701 - Artificial Intelligence opens the door to this young and rapidly growing field, while the STEP summer program furthers my engagement in future-making by placing me with groups like Watson and DeepMind.
Yet sometimes we need go back to our linear human nature. As AI grows smarter and approaches human level, we need to hold on even tighter to our human values, and think about the politics and ethics of AI. The answer, missing from traditional engineering curricula, lies in the book list of Contemporary Civilization in Columbia's unique Engineering Core. Closely examining Foucault's Discipline and Punishment, I can develop a deeper understanding of justice, and put a human touch in the algorithm of parole and sentencing decisions. Perusing Hume's An Enquiry Concerning Human Understandings, I can unravel how machine "thinks" and take AI technology to the next level.
In this era of fast development, infinite possibilities lie at my feet. Only with Columbia's light, can I unravel the path that leads to the person who I want to be.
Any change or advice would be much appreciated!!
