Writing Feedback / OBESITY IS A NEW DISEASE FOR CHILDREN [3]

Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered?

obesity among children rises

Today children suffered some diseases which in the past elderly people suffered, such as obesity. The dramatically increase the number of fat children is caused by new lifestyle. In this essay, the ways can be applied to prevent this problem is discussed and also, pays attention to reasons of this problem.

The new lifestyle can increase the obesity among the new generation of children for whom many junk food and prepared food are available regularly. This food not only does not have no worth food, but also increases the no-saturated fat for the young people. Moreover, no high-level of movement playing among children can increase the possibility of some diseases such as obesity. New computer games attract many children to set down on the one place for a long time without no movement, which can be harmful for them.

Some improvements in children's habits can reduce their obesity disease. The children's nutrition should be changed from high level of hydro-carbonate food to healthy food, which is one of the best ways to control extra fat of children's bodies. The use of more home-made food, fruits, and vegetables can help children to have more healthy regime food. Moreover, encouraging children to play in the green ground or park can prevent the possibility of fat disease. Because, the extra fat in the children's bodies can be burned during playing.

In the conclusion, the possibility of some diseases, such as obesity rises among these days children because of the new lifestyle. Children eat a lot of junk food and spend a lot of time for games without no movements. However, as mentioned in the essay, there are a lot of effective solutions.

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