bananakick
Dec 21, 2017
Writing Feedback / What Is the Depth of Martial Arts..? [3]
I sincerely appreciate your help, Holt.
There were Text1 and Text2, and there were two separate questions, one being "what is the depth of martial arts" and the other one being choosing one activity or sport that can be compared to martial arts. Since there were two separate questions, I started answering my second question without attempting to discuss the connection or why I suddenly start to talk about painting.
I will work on providing background information about Text 1 and Text 2 and also inform what I will be answering or writing about at the end of the introduction paragraph.
By "Avoid starting successive paragraphs with the same opening phrase," do you mean using words such as first, second, and third?
I capitalized Lee all the time, so I was not sure about what you were referring to.. Did you mean that I should write LEE instead of Lee?
Thank you!
I sincerely appreciate your help, Holt.
There were Text1 and Text2, and there were two separate questions, one being "what is the depth of martial arts" and the other one being choosing one activity or sport that can be compared to martial arts. Since there were two separate questions, I started answering my second question without attempting to discuss the connection or why I suddenly start to talk about painting.
I will work on providing background information about Text 1 and Text 2 and also inform what I will be answering or writing about at the end of the introduction paragraph.
By "Avoid starting successive paragraphs with the same opening phrase," do you mean using words such as first, second, and third?
I capitalized Lee all the time, so I was not sure about what you were referring to.. Did you mean that I should write LEE instead of Lee?
Thank you!