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Dec 31, 2017
Undergraduate / Any edits or suggestions for my Why Cornell essay? Leveraging my technological problem-solving [3]
Cornell Engineering celebrates innovative problem solving that helps people, communities...the world. Consider your ideas and aspirations and describe how a Cornell Engineering education would allow you to leverage technological problem-solving to improve the world we live in. (Please limit your response to 650 words.)
For my 16th birthday, my family went to see the movie Hidden Figures. For years I had been fascinated by space exploration and the moon landing and I was beyond ecstatic to see a movie about it. Before that day I had known all the facts and figures, the time of takeoff, the names of the astronauts, the temperature on that day, but what I realized was that I had no idea who had contributed. Not only had these women been pivotal to NASA, they were female and African American, in a time where it was an extreme disadvantage to have one of those qualities, nonetheless both. Without them, though, we never would have been able to touch the stars.
Cornell's motto "Any person, any study" personifies this. No problem can ever be solved if the people who are working on it all share the same point of view. It is only when you take the time to get input from those who have different experiences from you where you truly progress. In the future, I would love to explore the reaches of space with engineering, but if I only worked from my point of view I would miss out on so much potential progress. Beyond just technological advancements, society will never move forward if we cannot accept each other's differences and work together. When I attend conventions for Junior States of America (JSA) I see just how different people's points of views can be. We could be debating a heavily controversial topic and I would come into the debate with one mindset and leave questioning it because someone with a completely different background presented how the problem appeared to them.
Not only in terms of cultural diversity does Cornell stand out, it also proves its commitment to intellectual diversity through its emphasis on interdisciplinary studies. To accomplish any task, a multitude of talents are needed. The moon landing not only required engineers, but also public relation specialists, accountants, and doctors. The ability to combine the talents of students who are all endlessly passionate about the work they're doing all on one campus opens up a world of opportunity. Instead of a purely technical approach to a problem, a student from The College of Arts and Sciences could offer their point of view from a more humanities geared basis. In the real world, problems are not presented in a vacuum and the people who solve them cannot pretend they are. Having multiple points of view on one campus mimics how the real world will work, with multi-faceted problems that have to be attacked from all angles.
Additionally, a huge benefit of space exploration that is often overlooked is the mass benefits that come from the technology that is created in the pursuit of the unknown. The innovation that allowed us to go to the moon also benefited the world through satellites, camera, heart monitors, and even fabrics, to name just a few. Although the primary goal was the pursuit of the moon, the technology that was created to do so benefited the world in countless ways. The research opportunities available to undergraduates at Cornell is essential to applying theory to the real world. Especially at labs like the Cornell Nanoscale Science and Technology Facility (CNF), looking at the world from a new perspective can allow students to revolutionize the way they approach problems.
The key to moving forward is being open to new ideas and perspectives and Cornell embodies that ideal through its commitment to diversity and interdisciplinary study, just as NASA did during the space race. Both commitments to being open to new perspectives are what allowed them to progress the way they have and it is what allows them to keep moving forward.
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Cornell is one of my top school, but I really struggled trying to write this essay. This is the final result, but I feel as if it is so devoid of personality and the writing itself is sub-par. Any comments and/or suggestions would be extremely appreciated!
Cornell Engineering celebrates innovative problem solving that helps people, communities...the world. Consider your ideas and aspirations and describe how a Cornell Engineering education would allow you to leverage technological problem-solving to improve the world we live in. (Please limit your response to 650 words.)
ideas and aspirations regarding Cornell Engineering
For my 16th birthday, my family went to see the movie Hidden Figures. For years I had been fascinated by space exploration and the moon landing and I was beyond ecstatic to see a movie about it. Before that day I had known all the facts and figures, the time of takeoff, the names of the astronauts, the temperature on that day, but what I realized was that I had no idea who had contributed. Not only had these women been pivotal to NASA, they were female and African American, in a time where it was an extreme disadvantage to have one of those qualities, nonetheless both. Without them, though, we never would have been able to touch the stars.
Cornell's motto "Any person, any study" personifies this. No problem can ever be solved if the people who are working on it all share the same point of view. It is only when you take the time to get input from those who have different experiences from you where you truly progress. In the future, I would love to explore the reaches of space with engineering, but if I only worked from my point of view I would miss out on so much potential progress. Beyond just technological advancements, society will never move forward if we cannot accept each other's differences and work together. When I attend conventions for Junior States of America (JSA) I see just how different people's points of views can be. We could be debating a heavily controversial topic and I would come into the debate with one mindset and leave questioning it because someone with a completely different background presented how the problem appeared to them.
Not only in terms of cultural diversity does Cornell stand out, it also proves its commitment to intellectual diversity through its emphasis on interdisciplinary studies. To accomplish any task, a multitude of talents are needed. The moon landing not only required engineers, but also public relation specialists, accountants, and doctors. The ability to combine the talents of students who are all endlessly passionate about the work they're doing all on one campus opens up a world of opportunity. Instead of a purely technical approach to a problem, a student from The College of Arts and Sciences could offer their point of view from a more humanities geared basis. In the real world, problems are not presented in a vacuum and the people who solve them cannot pretend they are. Having multiple points of view on one campus mimics how the real world will work, with multi-faceted problems that have to be attacked from all angles.
Additionally, a huge benefit of space exploration that is often overlooked is the mass benefits that come from the technology that is created in the pursuit of the unknown. The innovation that allowed us to go to the moon also benefited the world through satellites, camera, heart monitors, and even fabrics, to name just a few. Although the primary goal was the pursuit of the moon, the technology that was created to do so benefited the world in countless ways. The research opportunities available to undergraduates at Cornell is essential to applying theory to the real world. Especially at labs like the Cornell Nanoscale Science and Technology Facility (CNF), looking at the world from a new perspective can allow students to revolutionize the way they approach problems.
The key to moving forward is being open to new ideas and perspectives and Cornell embodies that ideal through its commitment to diversity and interdisciplinary study, just as NASA did during the space race. Both commitments to being open to new perspectives are what allowed them to progress the way they have and it is what allows them to keep moving forward.
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Cornell is one of my top school, but I really struggled trying to write this essay. This is the final result, but I feel as if it is so devoid of personality and the writing itself is sub-par. Any comments and/or suggestions would be extremely appreciated!